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Re: Burning Past (makeshift title) A Short Story...
Amazing! I read this way too quickly to look for anything that could be misplaced in here. I didn't see anything, anyways. Well done. You did a good job at ...
Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: Rising Above It Steel (makeshift Title)
Hope you enjoy. Here goes nothing. ............. “There’s nothing we can do,” said a quiet voice. One word echoed in my head, rebounding off the inside of my skull, a ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: My Main Character
Beautiful character. I love the hair. The highlights are especially well done. *here comes the crit...please, don't take it badly...I just want to point out the stuff that could be ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: Portrait of a Puppy
This is a picture of our new puppy. It took a while to do, but it looks like her! :)
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: What Are You Writing Now?
;) I am writing so many different short stories right now, I can't even remember all of them until I go back and pick up the notebook! I'm really bad ...
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: Summer Is For...
I've already been to camp, and at camp we swam, and done things I haven't done at all in the last six months. I went to Tourette's camp, which was ...
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: Beyond Reach: a depiction of What it's like to have...
Just a poem...maybe a good poem if I'm lucky. ;) ............. There's the saying that the world stops turning, When something amazing happens. But my sky has already fallen, Crashing ...
May 16, 2009 -
Re: My Story-The Girl Who Can't Stop Moving
Have you ever been afraid? I don't mean the 'scared of zombies' kind of afraid, nor the sort that comes from watching Texas Chainsaw Massacre late at night. I mean ...
May 6, 2009 -
Re: Do You Get It?
I have no idea. I really...duh...I have no idea at all. I love having no idea. Blank. _____ :? :D
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Are You Excited?
Haha...I'm pumped up because I'm all energy..bout to write another chunk of a story. Haha! I love writing!!!
Apr 2, 2009 -
Re: Blue Lightning's Light
Here's my critique. I leave a number in the area I want to make a comment on, scroll down and see the comment, make sense? Okay, here I go. I ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: Lies
Everyone else has really picked this apart already in terms of grammar, punctuation, how the words sound I'll stick to the other issues. Such as exactly what your poem is ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: Them
You really make a good point. We all have one life and we have to choose what we do to ourselves and with ourselves on this journey. I think there ...
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: I Can't Quit Moving
Tourette's Syndrome is a neurological disorder characterized by abnormally large amounts of dopamine in the brain (not that doctors can tell if that's there without opening you up) but what ...
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: On The Sixth Day of Sickness
Just a something that I wrote up...hope you like it. Nothing special, just a, well, a something . ..................... It was one of those days, the sort of winter day ...
Mar 2, 2009
